Saturday, July 23, 2011

Madame Bovary's Daughter


Today I have a guest post from author Linda Urbach. Her novel, Madame Bovary's Daughter, is receiving rave reviews and I wanted to have her tell us about her process.


The research and writing process of writing Madame Bovary’s Daughter.


When I encountered the novel Madame Bovary for the first time in my early twenties thought: how sad, how tragic. Poor, poor Emma Bovary. Her husband was a bore, she was desperately in love with another man (make that two men), and she
craved another life, one that she could never afford (I perhaps saw a parallel to my own life here). Finally, tragically, she committed suicide. It took her almost a week of agony to die from the arsenic she’d ingested.

But twenty- five years later and as the mother of a very cherished daughter, I reread Madame Bovary. And now I had a different take altogether: What was this woman thinking? What kind of wife would repeatedly cheat on her hardworking husband
and spend all her family’s money on a lavish wardrobe for herself and gifts for her man of the moment; most important of all, what kind of mother was she?

It was almost as if she (Berthe Bovary) came to me in the middle of the night and said, “please tell my story.” This is the first historical fiction I’ve ever written so research played a big part.  My first two novels were al all about me but my life had gotten very boring which is why I turned to historical fiction. I used the Internet almost extensively. I found sites where I could walk through Parisian mansions of the times. Sites that not only showed what women wore but also gave instructions on how to create the gowns that were popular.  I bought this great book, Mrs. Beeton’s Household Management which gives you details of absolutely everything you need to know about the running of a house in the 1850’s.  You want to serve a 12-course dinner, she’ll tell you how. She’ll also tell you how many servants you need and how many pounds of paté you need to order.

The thing about research is you have to be careful not to let research get in the way of the writing. I tended to get so interested and involved in reading about the Victorian times and France in the 1850’s I would find the whole day had gone by and I hadn’t written a word. So the important thing for me is making sure I’ve got the story going forward. That’s the work part. The fun part is then filling in the historic details.  It’s like I have to finish my dinner before I’ve earned my dessert.  The other thing about research is that I learned to keep room open for a character I hadn’t thought about before.  For example, I suddenly came across the famous couturier Charles Frederick Worth, an Englishman who went to Paris and revolutionized the fashion business. He jumped off the page at me and insisted on being part of my novel.  So my advice is always keep a place at the table of your book for an unexpected guest.


An intriguing tale, I encourage you to check out Linda's book and see for yourselves. 

...Brilliantly integrating one of classic literature’s fictional creations with real historical figures, Madame Bovary’s Daughter is an uncommon coming-of-age tale, a splendid excursion through the rags and the riches of French fashion, and a sweeping novel of poverty and wealth, passion and revenge. -- Booklist


Wednesday, July 20, 2011

First Time Mishaps



I've been writing for over a decade. In fact, I wrote a series, three books, before my fourth book got published. This is pretty common. Writing is sort of a "learn as you go" type of gig.  Sure you have to have a great premise. Yes, its important to take workshops and classes. Definitely read books on the craft.


But...But!


You will never know what you will face when writing a novel until you're 50 thousand words deep and realize...you don't know where this is going. Or you get to 40 thousand words and figure out your story was better suited to novella.  Here's my favorite...You get to 120 thousand word and realize...this should be two separate books.


You have to write. Everyday. Give yourself time to get better. Face, overcome, and learn from your own trials during the process.


I'm giving a workshop for beginning fiction writers and I get a lot of the same topics during the question and answer period. There seems to be common problems that crop up with first novels. So I thought I'd list a few of them and see what you other writers and readers have found in your own journey.

  • The middle sags - you get to a certain point and realize that your characters aren't really doing anything.
  • Your secondary character became more interesting - the whole Luke/Han Solo phenomenon. Sidekick takes over plot.
  • You finished your story too soon - Everything falls into place according to plan and BAM!...the end -- on page 150.
  • Your story is too long - You're on page 800 of your hero's journey and he still hasn't rescued the babe.
  • You have a series of pointless battles and/or car chases -  Because...well you like to write those. And that's conflict, right?
Over the course of the next couple weeks, I will go over each reason a first novel hits these snags and methods to overcome them.

And for those who have completed a novel...what was the hardest part? What roadblocks did you hit and how did you deal? What did you learn from the experience?

Until next time...Go Write!

Friday, July 15, 2011

Apparently I'm Shallow...But I'm Okay With That.



So I've been reading a lot about character motivations lately and I've come to realize that initially I am a shallow, shallow, gal.  Well, not really because I intend to layer more noble motivations for my heroine to be attracted to the hero, but really...he looks at you like this...




Are your first thoughts about anything other than those eyes? Yeah, mine either. But the great part about writing a hero, especially a dark hero like the one in my next WIP, House on Raven Hill, is that you can infuse all types of noble, dangerous, and compelling reasons for your heroine to fall in love with him. 


I tend to list towards a hero that is witty and can duel both physically and figuratively with the heroine. He must be more than nice to look at. If I'm going to spend months of writing and editing with this guy...I have to like him.


My question to my fellow authors out there is this: Do you start with a list of qualities for your hero to possess or do you start out with qualities you hope he gains by the end of your novel?  How do you balance the need to move him along an arc of change with needing to make him initially attractive and a believable hero?


And for readers of romance...what are you favorite qualities in a hero?


Photograph by Lucy BurrLuck.  Photograph of Henry Cavil.